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不忘初心，方得始终。***总书记在党的十九大报告中指出：“中国共产党人的初心和使命，就是为中国人民谋幸福，为中华民族谋复兴。以下是小编整理的GRE将进入机考时代范文三篇，仅供参考，希望能够帮助到大家。
【篇1】GRE将进入机考时代
The?following?is?taken?from?a?memo?from?the?advertising?director?of?the?Silver?Screen?Movie?Production?Company.??
“According?to?a?recent?report?from?our?marketing?department,?fewer?people?attended?movies?produced?by?Silver?Screen?during?the?past?year?than?in?any?other?year.??And?yet?the?percentage?of?generally?favorable?comments?by?movie?reviewers?about?specific?Silver?Screen?movies?actually?increased?during?this?period.??Clearly,?the?contents?of?these?reviews?are?not?reaching?enough?of?our?prospective?viewers;?so?the?problem?lies?not?with?the?quality?of?our?movies?but?with?the?public"s?lack?of?awareness?that?movies?of?good?quality?are?available.??Silver?Screen?should?therefore?spend?more?of?its?budget?next?year?on?reaching?the?public?through?advertising?and?less?on?producing?new?movies.”??
This?argument?states?the?problem?but?the?conclusion?is?not?compatible?to?the?rest?of?the?statement.??
Silver?Screen?recognized?that?fewer?people?attended?movies?in?the?studied?year.??I?would?recommend?that?they?find?out?if?this?was?happening?with?the?entire?movie?market.??It?might?of?have?been?a?poor?year?for?movies?for?all?movie?companies.??
Silver?Screen?recognized?that?of?the?movies?that?they?did,?they?received?favorable?reviews.??It?should?be?concluded?that?they?are?doing?well?with?the?movies?that?they?are?making.??Obviously,?they?are?on?track?with?the?consumer?in?what?they?are?producing.??
I?understand?the?conclusion?that?more?people?need?to?be?exposed?to?the?movies?available?for?viewing.??The?last?statement?focuses?on?the?fact?that?advertising?needs?to?be?increased,?but?does?it?by?cutting?production?costs.??This?is?wrong,?instead?of?continuing?what?is?working?the?company?plans?on?focusing?on?advertising?while?taking?away?from?producing.??The?consumers?like?the?movies?they?make.??If?Silver?Screen?focuses?their?funds?with?advertising,?producing?funds?will?suffer.??It?will?not?matter?how?much?advertising?is?done,?if?it?is?a?poorly?produced?movie,?nobody?will?want?to?go???Eventually,?Silver?Screen?will?get?the?reputation?of?producing?bad?movies.??There?has?to?be?some?compromise?which?doesn"t?hurt?producing?costs.??
Commentary??
This?response?is?flawed.??It?makes?two?points,?the?first?of?which?is?undeveloped?(paragraph?2)?and?the?second?of?which?(the?remainder?of?the?essay)?is?mainly?discussion?rather?than?analysis,?although?some?meager?analysis?is?present.??The?author?also?offers?a?questionable?assumption?of?his?or?her?own?in stating?in?paragraph?4?that?“the?consumers?like?the?movies?they?make.”??Overall,?there?is?nothing?incisive?or?convincing?in?this?paper.??It?is?loosely?organized?and?not?well?developed.??
The?response?is?clear;?what?errors?there?are?never?interfere?with?a?reader"s?understanding,?but?there?are?frequent?minor?errors?in?language,?syntax,?and?punctuation.??
For?all?of?these?reasons,?the?response?is?clearly?limited?and?deserves?a?score?of?3.
【篇2】GRE将进入机考时代
The?following?is?taken?from?a?memo?from?the?advertising?director?of?the?Silver?Screen?Movie?Production?Company.??
“According?to?a?recent?report?from?our?marketing?department,?fewer?people?attended?movies?produced?by?Silver?Screen?during?the?past?year?than?in?any?other?year.??And?yet?the?percentage?of?generally?favorable?comments?by?movie?reviewers?about?specific?Silver?Screen?movies?actually?increased?during?this?period.??Clearly,?the?contents?of?these?reviews?are?not?reaching?enough?of?our?prospective?viewers;?so?the?problem?lies?not?with?the?quality?of?our?movies?but?with?the?public"s?lack?of?awareness?that?movies?of?good?quality?are?available.??Silver?Screen?should?therefore?spend?more?of?its?budget?next?year?on?reaching?the?public?through?advertising?and?less?on?producing?new?movies.”??
Although?the?reasoning?in?this?arguement?is?logical,?the?writer?failed?to?consider?other?reasons?for?the?disparity?between?the?percentage?of?people?attending?the?company"s?movie?and?the?percentage?of?favorable?reviews.??Perhaps?the?fault?lies?with?the?reviewers?and?not?the?production?company;?the?public?may?not?trust?the?critics"?reviews.??Another?posibility?for?the?attendance?drop?is?that?the?general?public?does?not?find?the?subject?matter?of?the?movies?enticing.??If?that?were?the?case,?spending?less?on?producing?new?movies?in?an?effort?to?re-direct?funds?to?advertising?could?backfire?by?further?limiting?the?types?of?movies?available?to?the?potential?audience.??Maybe?the?general?public?is?simply?not?impressed?with?the?critically-acclaimed?qualities?of?the?movies?(such?as?eloquent?screenplays,?artful?cinematography,?and?realistic?acting)?and?and?would?prefer?seeing?flashy?special?effects?and?big-name?stars.??The?possible?reasons?for?the?attendance?decline?are?numerous;?even?aspects?not?directly?related?to?the?movie?industry?(such?as?the?improving?quality?of?television?programming?and?the?increasing?popularity?of?home?computer?use)?may?play?large?roles.??The?company"s?management?would?be?wise?to?consider?and?study?the?entire?realm?of?possibilities?before?making?drastic?changes?in?its?budget?based?on?one?statistical?discovery.??
Commentary??
This?response?identifies?and?analyzes?some?important?flaws?in?the?argument.??Although?the?number?of?points?mentioned?is?the?same?as?that?in?the?sample?5?paper,?this?response?remains?at?the?4?score?level?because?the?points?of?the?critique?are?only?minimally?developed?or?supported.??
The?essay?identifies?four?points:??
--?the?public?might?not?trust?critics?
--?the?movies"?subject?matter?might?not?be?appealing
--?the?public?might?prefer?seeing?special?effects?or?big-name?stars?rather????than?good?cinematography?or?realistic?acting?
--?perhaps?improvement?in?TV?programming?or?increased?use?of?home????computers?has?kept?people?away?from?movie?theaters??
Ideas?in?the?response?are?conveyed?well?and?clearly;?the?use?of?language?is?generally?strong.??But?the?paper"s?“bare-bones”?analysis?gives?it?a?list-like?quality.??It?is?therefore?merely?adequate?and?merits?a?score?of?4.?
【篇3】GRE将进入机考时代
ing?is?taken?from?a?memo?from?the?advertising?director?of?the?Silver?Screen?Movie?Production?Company.??
“According?to?a?recent?report?from?our?marketing?department,?fewer?people?attended?movies?produced?by?Silver?Screen?during?the?past?year?than?in?any?other?year.??And?yet?the?percentage?of?generally?favorable?comments?by?movie?reviewers?about?specific?Silver?Screen?movies?actually?increased?during?this?period.??Clearly,?the?contents?of?these?reviews?are?not?reaching?enough?of?our?prospective?viewers;?so?the?problem?lies?not?with?the?quality?of?our?movies?but?with?the?public"s?lack?of?awareness?that?movies?of?good?quality?are?available.??Silver?Screen?should?therefore?spend?more?of?its?budget?next?year?on?reaching?the?public?through?advertising?and?less?on?producing?new?movies.”??
The?advertising?director?of?Silver?Screen?should?lose?his?job.??It?is?clear?that?his?analysis?of?the?decrease?in?attendance?in?the?past?year?was?incomplete.??A?better?qualified?individual?might?have?explored?the?issue?further?by?doing?several?different?things.??First?of?all,?surveys?of?the?general?population?could?provide?a?clue?to?the?decreased?viewership.?They?may?find?that?people?aren"t?as?willing?to?pay?the?high?prices?anymore.??A?survey?may?also?reveal?that?people?are?aware?of?Silver?Screen,?but?opt?not?to?see?the?films.??An?inspection?of?the?nature?of?the?films?made?by?Silver?Screen?could?also?hint?to?the?root?of?the?problem.??If?Silver?Screen?produces?a?lot?of?the?same?type?of?movie,?then?the?problem?may?be?that?they?don"t?produce?enough?to?appeal?to?the?diverse?interests?of?the?population.??For?instance,??if?their?movies?typically?contain?excessive?violence?and?foul?language,?parents?won"t?take?their?children?to?these?films.??That?is?a?significant?portion?of?the?potential?viewing?population?lost.??
The?ad?director?mentions?that?reviewers?liked?specific?films?and?gave?more??favorable?reviews?than?in?the?past.??But?he?neglects?to?mention?the?specific?numbers-?critics?may?have?raved?about?2?movies?and?turned?their?thumbs?down?the?10?others.??If?thats"?the?case,?it"s?no?wonder?that?viewership?has?declined.??
Spending?more?on?advertising,?and?less?on?production,?as?the?ad?director?suggests,?could?drive?the?company?out?of?business.??If?the?media?builds?alot?of?hype?over?a?new?release?that?was?poorly?produced,?people?are?more?likely?to?be?disappointed,?and?skeptical?about?future?productions.??This?is?certainly?not?in?the?company"s?best?interests.?What?is?in?the?company"s?best?interest?is?a?broader?scope?of?the?problem,?and?different?approaches?to?solving?i??
Commentary??
This?strong?response?begins?with?an?attack?on?the?advertising?director?of?Silver?Screen?but?quickly?shifts?to?identifying?major?flaws?in?the?argument.??The?main?points?of?the?critique?are?that??
--?the?real?reasons?for?a?decline?in?viewership?have?not?yet?been????identified;?
--?Silver?Screen?may?not?produce?different?kinds?of?movies?to?appeal?to????diverse?interests;?
--?the?number?of?favorably?reviewed?movies?may?actually?have?been????very?low;?and?
--?spending?money?to?produce?a?possibly?poor?movie?could?hurt?rather than?help?the?company.??
Although?more?points?are?made?here?than?are?made?in?the?sample?6?response?on?this?topic,?each?of?the?points?made?in?the?6?paper?is?developed.??That?is?not?the?case?here.??In?this?response,?each?point?is?supported?(by?perhaps?an?additional?sentence),?but?it?is?not?further?developed.??The?paper?is?smoothly?organized?with?few?but?appropriate?transitions.??The?writing?is?strong?with?some?variety?in?syntax.??For?these?reasons,?this?response?earns?a?score?of?5.?